Comments on: Carphone Warehouse manager proves what a moron he is http://www.mrdaz.com/carphone-warehouse-manager-proves-what-a-moron-he-is/ So much anger, so little time Tue, 07 Feb 2012 22:20:22 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Pedant http://www.mrdaz.com/carphone-warehouse-manager-proves-what-a-moron-he-is/comment-page-1/#comment-12285 Pedant Fri, 28 Aug 2009 14:42:53 +0000 http://www.mrdaz.com/?p=770#comment-12285 SPELLING AND GRAMMER ......Grammar perhaps? SPELLING AND GRAMMER ……Grammar perhaps?

]]> By: bobby lee http://www.mrdaz.com/carphone-warehouse-manager-proves-what-a-moron-he-is/comment-page-1/#comment-12269 bobby lee Sat, 22 Aug 2009 22:36:12 +0000 http://www.mrdaz.com/?p=770#comment-12269 I have spotted a few. Firstly, you have written in capital letters, this is grammatically incorrect. You have also placed just one space after each full stop yet the beginning of a new sentence always requires two spaces. At the end of your rant you wrote "Now, a bit of advice. If you are going to compose a written statement, particularly if there is a chance of it appearing in the public domain, at least have the common decency to undertake some level of education." As you have closely related independent clauses not conjoined with a coordinating conjunction, you should have placed a semi colon between "Now, a bit of advice; if you are..." Anyway this could go on for a while so I shall leave it at that. Regards, Bobby I have spotted a few. Firstly, you have written in capital letters, this is grammatically incorrect. You have also placed just one space after each full stop yet the beginning of a new sentence always requires two spaces.
At the end of your rant you wrote “Now, a bit of advice. If you are going to compose a written statement, particularly if there is a chance of it appearing in the public domain, at least have the common decency to undertake some level of education.”
As you have closely related independent clauses not conjoined with a coordinating conjunction, you should have placed a semi colon between “Now, a bit of advice; if you are…”

Anyway this could go on for a while so I shall leave it at that.

Regards,
Bobby

]]> By: HTC Touch HD | Mr Daz http://www.mrdaz.com/carphone-warehouse-manager-proves-what-a-moron-he-is/comment-page-1/#comment-11625 HTC Touch HD | Mr Daz Sat, 07 Feb 2009 16:05:12 +0000 http://www.mrdaz.com/?p=770#comment-11625 [...] time I used them, where they lied to me repeatedly. Their staff as bad enough too, as one of their former store managers proved when he emailed me just to abuse me. Quality customer service from Carphone [...] [...] time I used them, where they lied to me repeatedly. Their staff as bad enough too, as one of their former store managers proved when he emailed me just to abuse me. Quality customer service from Carphone [...]

]]> By: Doneover http://www.mrdaz.com/carphone-warehouse-manager-proves-what-a-moron-he-is/comment-page-1/#comment-6309 Doneover Mon, 11 Aug 2008 20:44:00 +0000 http://www.mrdaz.com/?p=770#comment-6309 Did you spot MY deliberate spelling mistake? Hmmm, probably not. Keep looking, it will probably be enough to keep you staring at the screen for hours. Did you spot MY deliberate spelling mistake? Hmmm, probably not. Keep looking, it will probably be enough to keep you staring at the screen for hours.

]]> By: Doneover http://www.mrdaz.com/carphone-warehouse-manager-proves-what-a-moron-he-is/comment-page-1/#comment-6308 Doneover Mon, 11 Aug 2008 20:42:03 +0000 http://www.mrdaz.com/?p=770#comment-6308 Ooh, what fun I'm going to have with this! I'm going to highlight all the spelling and grammatical errors this fool has made. FIRSTLY, THE BEGINNING OF EVERY NEW SENTENCE SHOULD BEGIN WITH A CAPITAL LETTER. (as you put it incompetent CSA). * SHOULD NOT BE BRACKETED. I also happened to have 2 members of my family that work for the CSA * INCORRECT FORMATTING your self *IS ONE WORD, NOT TWO. IN ANY CASE, WHEN WRITTEN IN THE COBTAXT IT WAS, IT SHOULD SIMPLY BE "YOU", NOT "YOURSELF" so what you have to pay the mortgage * THERE SHOULD BE A COMMA HERE BEFORE CONTINUATION. thats * AN APOSTROPHE SHOULD BE IN THIS WORD (FOR THE IDIOT'S BENEFIT, AN APOSTROPHE IS THIS ') a a * WORD REPITITION. IT'S NOT BIG AND IT'S NOT CLEVER. happend * THE "E" IS MISSING FROM THIS WORD. carphone warehouse. * WHEN CITING THE NAME OF A BUSINESS, CAPITAL LETTERS SHOULD BE USED AT THE BEGINNING OF EACH WORD, WITH THE EXCEPTION OF WORDS SUCH AS "IF", "AND" & "THE" where * IT'S NOT "WHERE, IT SHOULD BE "WERE" TO * SHOULD BE "TOO" if you and your now EX wife where to stupid to know you get a free upgrade at the end of your contract then its your own fault. * SHOULD READ "TOO STUPID TO BE UNAWARE" OR "TOO STUPID TO NOT KNOW THAT" (WHO IS LOOKING LIKE THE STUPID ONE NOW, EH?) coments * MISSPELT. SHOULD BE "COMMENTS" it is in know way true * WRONG FORMAT. IT SHOULD READ "IT IS IN NO WAY TRUE" garentee * GUARANTEE!! surly * SURELY expertese * EXPERTISE for over half an hour ! in store * THE SENTENCE IS NOT FINISHED, WHY THE EXCLAMATION MARK? IF REALLY NECESSARY, IT SHOULD BE IN BRACKETS LIKE THIS: (!) beleave *BELIEVE Incompatence * IF YOU MUST CALL SOMEONE INCOMPETENT, LEARN TO SPELL THE WORD CORRECTLY FIRST, IN ORDER TO AVOID LOOKING INCOMPETENT YOURSELF. FOR YOUR BENEFIT, THE WAY I HAVE SPELT THE WORD IS THE CORRECT SPELLING. hassel. * HASSLE marrige * MARRIAGE with a further 2 kids * WRONG FORMAT. IT SHOULD READ "WITH AN ADDITIONAL TWO CHILDREN" FUCK IT. IT SHOULD NOT READ AT ALL, AS THERE IS NO SECOND MARRIAGE OR TWO ADDITIONAL CHILDREN, AS DAZ HAS POINTED OUT TO YOU. uf you * WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS, A NEW WORD? "IF" AND *YOU", TWO SEPERATE WORDS. your * IN THIS CONTEXT, THE WORDS "YOU" AND "ARE" HAVE BEEN JOINED TO FORM ONE WORD, IN WHICH CASE, THERE SHOULD BE AN APOSTROPHE. "YOU'RE" IS THE CORRECT SPELLING AND GRAMMER WHICH SHOULD BE APPLIED TO THIS WORD. Now, a bit of advice. If you are going to compose a written statement, particularly if there is a chance of it appearing in the public domain, at least have the common decency to undertake some level of education. It makes the author appear professional, and level headed, instead of the illeterate bumbling idiot you have portrayed yourself as. Fuck it, you haven't really portrayed yourself as anything at all, have you? No, you really are an illeterate bumbling idiot. Warmest Regards. Ooh, what fun I’m going to have with this! I’m going to highlight all the spelling and grammatical errors this fool has made.

FIRSTLY, THE BEGINNING OF EVERY NEW SENTENCE SHOULD BEGIN WITH A CAPITAL LETTER.

(as you put it incompetent CSA). * SHOULD NOT BE BRACKETED.

I also happened to have 2 members of my family that work for the CSA * INCORRECT FORMATTING

your self *IS ONE WORD, NOT TWO. IN ANY CASE, WHEN WRITTEN IN THE COBTAXT IT WAS, IT SHOULD SIMPLY BE “YOU”, NOT “YOURSELF”

so what you have to pay the mortgage * THERE SHOULD BE A COMMA HERE BEFORE CONTINUATION.

thats * AN APOSTROPHE SHOULD BE IN THIS WORD (FOR THE IDIOT’S BENEFIT, AN APOSTROPHE IS THIS ‘)

a a * WORD REPITITION. IT’S NOT BIG AND IT’S NOT CLEVER.

happend * THE “E” IS MISSING FROM THIS WORD.

carphone warehouse. * WHEN CITING THE NAME OF A BUSINESS, CAPITAL LETTERS SHOULD BE USED AT THE BEGINNING OF EACH WORD, WITH THE EXCEPTION OF WORDS SUCH AS “IF”, “AND” & “THE”

where * IT’S NOT “WHERE, IT SHOULD BE “WERE”

TO * SHOULD BE “TOO”

if you and your now EX wife where to stupid to know you get a free upgrade at the end of your contract then its your own fault. * SHOULD READ “TOO STUPID TO BE UNAWARE” OR “TOO STUPID TO NOT KNOW THAT” (WHO IS LOOKING LIKE THE STUPID ONE NOW, EH?)

coments * MISSPELT. SHOULD BE “COMMENTS”

it is in know way true * WRONG FORMAT. IT SHOULD READ “IT IS IN NO WAY TRUE”

garentee * GUARANTEE!!

surly * SURELY

expertese * EXPERTISE

for over half an hour ! in store * THE SENTENCE IS NOT FINISHED, WHY THE EXCLAMATION MARK? IF REALLY NECESSARY, IT SHOULD BE IN BRACKETS LIKE THIS: (!)

beleave *BELIEVE

Incompatence * IF YOU MUST CALL SOMEONE INCOMPETENT, LEARN TO SPELL THE WORD CORRECTLY FIRST, IN ORDER TO AVOID LOOKING INCOMPETENT YOURSELF. FOR YOUR BENEFIT, THE WAY I HAVE SPELT THE WORD IS THE CORRECT SPELLING.

hassel. * HASSLE

marrige * MARRIAGE

with a further 2 kids * WRONG FORMAT. IT SHOULD READ “WITH AN ADDITIONAL TWO CHILDREN” FUCK IT. IT SHOULD NOT READ AT ALL, AS THERE IS NO SECOND MARRIAGE OR TWO ADDITIONAL CHILDREN, AS DAZ HAS POINTED OUT TO YOU.

uf you * WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS, A NEW WORD? “IF” AND *YOU”, TWO SEPERATE WORDS.

your * IN THIS CONTEXT, THE WORDS “YOU” AND “ARE” HAVE BEEN JOINED TO FORM ONE WORD, IN WHICH CASE, THERE SHOULD BE AN APOSTROPHE. “YOU’RE” IS THE CORRECT SPELLING AND GRAMMER WHICH SHOULD BE APPLIED TO THIS WORD.

Now, a bit of advice. If you are going to compose a written statement, particularly if there is a chance of it appearing in the public domain, at least have the common decency to undertake some level of education. It makes the author appear professional, and level headed, instead of the illeterate bumbling idiot you have portrayed yourself as. Fuck it, you haven’t really portrayed yourself as anything at all, have you? No, you really are an illeterate bumbling idiot.

Warmest Regards.

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